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Hollylane 03-04-2012 11:29 AM

Simply Haiku
 
Only 3 rules

1. Be kind to each other.
2. Please post your own Haiku.
3. Before you hit the submit button, take a moment to consider if you feel like your Haiku may appear to be a passive aggressive attack on another member, review rule 1. If you still want to hit the submit button, and there is a chance someone may take it the wrong way, make sure you give an explanation about what it is concerning.

As a reminder:

The first line should be 5 syllables
The second line should be 7 syllables
The third line should be 5 syllables

Example:

It’s very simple
Five syllables then seven
And five once again

(Thank you to Truly Scrumptious for this Haiku that she posted in Original Bad Prose or Stories! thread)


Have fun!

Hollylane 03-04-2012 11:40 AM



A new day has dawned
Warmth brings mist up from the soil
Spring nears, bringing life

Parker 03-04-2012 12:40 PM

My dogs and I
Are wanting to take a nap
Screw it - back later!

:winky:

Gaige 03-04-2012 12:56 PM

Almost time for bed
Finishing last minute chores
Now time for those Zzz’s

SoNotHer 03-04-2012 01:18 PM

In the month of winds
I find myself again, here
and where I began.

Hollylane 03-04-2012 01:46 PM



You sounded sleepy
I wanted to tuck you in...
Listen to your peace

Parker 03-04-2012 06:53 PM


Asked about movies
I showed her my DVDs
Over two hundred

:|

Hollylane 03-04-2012 07:19 PM



Perched upon a rock
Next to the cold clear water
Rippled looking glass

girl_dee 03-04-2012 07:27 PM

the day is done now

the nights are long and loving

She is so warming

Licious 03-04-2012 07:34 PM

A haiku I just made up for fun:


Some haikus are weird,
They may leave you wondering.
Stradivarius.



Have a great Sunday and week. :bow:

Hollylane 03-05-2012 10:29 PM



I worked off work stress
In the Zumba class at gym
Mondays are so fun

Hollylane 03-07-2012 01:47 AM



My nose was too cold
I covered it with a scarf
No sniffles wanted

Hollylane 03-11-2012 10:28 AM



Springtime birds trilling
Life poking up through the soil
Circle of life turns

Hollylane 03-14-2012 05:12 PM



You are here with me
No one else is invited
Enjoy each moment

Hollylane 03-14-2012 05:19 PM



March brings frigid breath
But April returns singing
The Earth Mother's song

Passionaria 03-15-2012 06:13 PM

indulge me
 
craving tahini
rich sensual indulgence
lips and tongue want more

Hollylane 03-16-2012 09:39 AM



Something is stirring
Tangible? Likely a "yes."
But meeting makes clear

Amber2010 03-16-2012 09:59 AM

True friendships have work
Some feelings can change with time
but worth the effort

Hollylane 03-16-2012 10:27 AM



Procrastination
It really must come to end
Time to get to work

Passionaria 03-17-2012 01:36 AM

dark of moon tonight
hummingbird whispers stories
magic grows within

sweet nectar of life
you enchant my very soul
irresistible

look into my eyes
undeniable passion
I call my own name

sanctify myself
the fire said burn brighter
sumptuous self love


Gaige 03-17-2012 08:14 AM


Sewing torn pockets
Mobile phone will stay there now
No more phone on floor

Hollylane 03-19-2012 10:11 PM

For Gaige... ;)
 


My team, the Steelers
Yours, the Baltimore Ravens
Opposites attract?

Cin 03-20-2012 06:37 PM

I don’t usually enjoy the process of writing haiku. I’m someone who’d find it tight having to wish somebody a good day using only twenty-five words. Consequently haiku feels too restrictive. I can’t express myself. There’s no room to maneuver. I imagine that’s the idea, yet the limits feel excessive for me. Claustrophobic even. But it’s just the thing to teach me to be succinct. I need to learn to speak in tight neat packages of brevity. So I figured I’d write a haiku about that.

What can I say when
words are so tightly wrapped there’s
no space for a sigh

Hollylane 03-20-2012 09:08 PM



Its brilliance blinded
Butterflies teased my insides
Because...defense breached


The JD 03-20-2012 09:51 PM

Spring in Atlanta:
Love and pollen in the air,
A gush of plant sperm.

Hollylane 03-20-2012 11:31 PM



Talking could be bad
Mercury in retrograde
Silence equals peace?

Gaige 03-21-2012 07:53 AM


Brisk, long, scenic walk
Now home with a tired dog
Just in time, rain starts

Hollylane 03-27-2012 11:35 PM



Red wine, just one glass
Swirled around, bursting on tongue
Senses now heightened

Hollylane 03-28-2012 11:08 AM



He looked like a mop
Little suds, snips, cookie treat
Now looks like a dog

Passionaria 03-28-2012 04:29 PM

cool
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Miss Tick (Post 550490)
I don’t usually enjoy the process of writing haiku. I’m someone who’d find it tight having to wish somebody a good day using only twenty-five words. Consequently haiku feels too restrictive. I can’t express myself. There’s no room to maneuver. I imagine that’s the idea, yet the limits feel excessive for me. Claustrophobic even. But it’s just the thing to teach me to be succinct. I need to learn to speak in tight neat packages of brevity. So I figured I’d write a haiku about that.

Hi Miss Tick, I want to validate your experience with Haiku. I hear you, yet you came up with it anyway :) For me it's like squeezing a tube of tooth paste, the pressure helps me spit it out, in way's I would never have come up with on my own, lol.

Haiku poetry
makes me search in new places
for delicious words

Passionaria 04-01-2012 05:19 PM

Texas heat rising
last summer the earth scorched dry
frog songs call the rain

Passionaria 04-01-2012 05:28 PM

sultry voice insights
sweet sensuous upheaval
moonlight kisses stars

:moonstars:

Passionaria 04-03-2012 10:23 AM

addicted to dysfunction
 
addictive cravings
karmic weaving's unconscious
dysfunctional love

is your comfort zone
and real love feels abnormal
kindness is boring

so take the abuse
calling it love is crazy
it's your cross to bare
http://shellybeachonline.files.wordp...utterflyi1.jpg


Hollylane 04-12-2012 10:25 PM



It was such a charge,
the flashes of light above.
Lightning stoked the fires

scootebaby 04-12-2012 10:41 PM

Longing for loves kiss
Closing eyes I imagine
Her soft lips to mine.
-------------------------------------------------------------

When you least expect
Your heart is stolen away
Breathing becomes hard

-------------------------------------------------------------

I was on a roll
Thought i could keep it going
Guess i was wrong huh :cheesy:

Gaige 04-13-2012 04:29 AM

1/3 of income
Taxes are too fucking high
Robbed by government

Hollylane 04-14-2012 10:06 AM



Eyes won't stay open
The bed has been made neatly,
but still, it woos me

Passionaria 04-20-2012 05:07 AM

wind shifts unsettling
some dreams they never come true
sorrows to the wind.......


http://buttercup600.files.wordpress....7641.jpg?w=450

Hollylane 04-23-2012 09:13 PM



25 days left
'til Virginia Beach sunsets
Time passes quickly

Hollylane 04-29-2012 04:50 PM

GrrrRRRrr!!!
 


Window broken out
of travel trailer. DAMN IT!!
Want to beat some ass!!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Battery stolen
Off of the travel trailer
Hah, battery was dead!




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