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01-04-2012, 09:43 PM

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Originally Posted by Hollylane

He really didn’t know what had gone wrong, though something was amiss, like finding the last tortilla chip loaded with cheese and it has a long gray hair from your granny stuck in it that you discover only as it is hanging out of your mouth and pulling on your lip when you start to crunch with what you thought would be triumph.

This is beautiful. Classic. I love it. (the whole thing of course) but special mention for this awesome paragraph.

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