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Although poetry and mathematics often seem to be incompatible areas of study, the philosophy of OULIPO seeks to connect them. There are numerous OULIPO formulas to chose from. I find snowballing interesting. You can either start with one word and add another word and another until you have the poem you want or you can start with one letter or one syllable increasing by one each line.
An example would be I Am Not Sure These Poetic Numeric Artistic Offerings Challenge or restraints constrict creating variety control focus much fun me u or start with a one word sentence, build the story up sequentially with each sentence containing one word more than the last Hungry Just eat Easy to say Things always take priority You would imagine from this I would naturally be extremely skinny But unfortunately there just aren’t enough things There are all kinds of Oulipo formulas these are just some of my favorites. You can look up some and try them or try these or make up some poetic/mathematical formula of your own but hopefully you will give it a try. If you decide to make up your own formula could you add a line explaining what the formula is so others can try it? I look forward to seeing what you come up with. |
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I say . . . here’s the thing: it’s not you, (though really, it is you) i’m taking the high road (happily, it’s traffic-free) avoiding contact (or conflict) just another weary traveller checking the map for the exit to free. |
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Or Treats Both often lead to some sticky situations |
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Awesome snowballs you guys! I enjoyed reading them.
I have another snowball. It's a syllablc poem. It starts with one syllable goes up to a certain number and then comes back down to one. E’er Always Infinite Now falls from grace Comfort lives in lies The lexicon of life Fiction as reality Somehow translucently opaque Stone replicas, imitating life Zombie apocalypse is upon us Ignore the end inherent in beginning Blindfold dancing Gangnam style on the edge of time Reality’s capacity for opacity The performance of life is deserving of an Oscar Minimal restrictions on portrayals suggested Creatively recreating what is truth Running slow motion through fields of flowers while Passively participating in the Oppression of those who are less than Less than what is never made clear Except for innuendo And inference of a Certain lack of worth Geographic Lottery Aside Die |
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If it turns out that we don’t win the lottery
and House Hunters International doesn’t find us a villa on some tropical island we’ll decide to buy just to live there alone like hermits making art out of sea glass watching the stars all night . . . then this is the way that I see it: Saturday yard sales croissants on Sunday crumbs in the car (they are best eaten warm) making art out of cast offs thanking our lucky stars for this life entering House Hunters marathons in our TV spreadsheet laughing because ten years ago I said "I never watch TV", and your answer back then was "me neither". |
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(i had never heard of OULIPO/Youlipo. so i just did it my way. no formula. just a pattern. a+b=b+a)
an axiom you and me you and me an axiom the relative truth and other relative truths and other relative truths the relative truth on every slope and every curve and every curve on every slope the arch of your parabola of your parabola the arch and your vertex a starting point of reasoning a starting point of reasoning and your vertex such a postulate x and y intercepts x and y intercepts such a postulate mac august 2013 |
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foe, fum I am intemperate And cannot change life I can change my perception Like an opiate at receptor mu |
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I guess it is seldom but rather random
if not random then it could be perpetual this thing called love or lover's knot not even close to like or liked But who could know it's worth if worth could be measured breadth, depth or pi-r-square hexicylindrical illusionist you are you, you? You, you are, shapeshifter drifter spy extraordinaire, bushmaster binocular, unfocused hocus-pocus kaleidescope of broken glass shards of unspoken polysemous carnage jumbled understanding of mistaken attempts disguised as clownish 80-proof mocked-up irony heir apparent of radio-head with broken antennae physicist of un-scientific mathematical preponderancy of statistical errors. (I have no idea what I was trying to say and I don't know if I was doing it right; but I gave it a try and will try it again, soon, I think) |
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