fucku haiku

Diva · 11-15-2009, 08:45 PM

Sleeping, snoring dog,
Too bad You can't press Your nose
With opposing thumbs.

Diva · 11-16-2009, 08:46 AM

Lightning and thunder
Woke me from pleasant slumber.
Where's my Hitachi?

========

Rainy, stormy night ~
The leaves cover my terrace.
Damn leaves! I hate Thee!!!

Tommi · 11-16-2009, 09:12 AM

He YEOOOWWWs loud at 5.

Swatting his furry cat ass

Earhquake then in 10.

Dylan · 11-16-2009, 09:28 AM

Your colors shine through
Duplicitous and shallow
No longer of use

Kast · 11-16-2009, 09:42 AM

The way I understand it is - The third line is the most important, it's what you're really talking about, the other two are descriptive in an 'off' way of the third, like:

The roaring lion
Ravishes its prey - consumes.
Oh! My dang head hurts.

But, what do I know?...

Diva · 11-16-2009, 09:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kam

The way I understand it is - The third line is the most important, it's what you're really talking about, the other two are descriptive in an 'off' way of the third, like:

The roaring lion
Ravishes its prey - consumes.
Oh! My dang head hurts.

But, what do I know?...

Discuss.

Now, MY dang head hurts
When I think of discussion.
"Fucku" means nothing?

<giggle>

KayCee · 11-16-2009, 10:05 AM

The bear woke up
spring flowers appear - light
Got to fix breakfast!

NJFemmie · 11-16-2009, 08:50 AM

Don't think I understand
how this haiku thing works
but I'll give it a try.

11-15-2009, 08:45 PM	#1
Diva Timed Out How Do You Identify?: Diva Preferred Pronoun?: Diva Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Chez Diva Posts: 11,879 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 9,263 Thanked 17,175 Times in 5,239 Posts Rep Power: 0	Ode To Lucy, The Wonder Dog Sleeping, snoring dog, Too bad You can't press Your nose With opposing thumbs.

11-16-2009, 08:50 AM	#8
NJFemmie Senior Member How Do You Identify?: The original lime-twisted femme Preferred Pronoun?: I answer to most things, especially lesbian. Relationship Status: Still loving my Mare ;) Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: New Jersey Posts: 4,683 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 1,343 Thanked 11,420 Times in 2,977 Posts Rep Power: 21474856	Don't think I understand how this haiku thing works but I'll give it a try. __________________

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11-16-2009, 08:46 AM	#2
Diva Timed Out How Do You Identify?: Diva Preferred Pronoun?: Diva Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Chez Diva Posts: 11,879 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 9,263 Thanked 17,175 Times in 5,239 Posts Rep Power: 0	Lightning and thunder Woke me from pleasant slumber. Where's my Hitachi? ======== Rainy, stormy night ~ The leaves cover my terrace. Damn leaves! I hate Thee!!!

11-16-2009, 09:12 AM	#3
Tommi Infamous Member How Do You Identify?: Usually "Hello" Relationship Status: Married and Bound to Tommi's kaijira (Ts_kaijira ) Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Suthun.... California that is. Across the ridge from Laguna Beach. Posts: 8,151 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 13,621 Thanked 21,338 Times in 5,970 Posts Rep Power: 21474861	He YEOOOWWWs loud at 5. Swatting his furry cat ass Earhquake then in 10.

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Kast Member How Do You Identify?: butch Preferred Pronoun?: hye Relationship Status: in love with her Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: europe Posts: 185 My Photo Gallery Thanks: 391 Thanked 511 Times in 125 Posts Rep Power: 2413940	The way I understand it is - The third line is the most important, it's what you're really talking about, the other two are descriptive in an 'off' way of the third, like: The roaring lion Ravishes its prey - consumes. Oh! My dang head hurts. But, what do I know?...

11-16-2009, 10:05 AM	#7
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