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Old 10-04-2013, 07:17 PM   #1
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Default Written 2002

Figured I would try writing from a femme's perspective...and this is what I came up with:

A boi, a butch, a touch
Touch upon my skin
My skin longs
Longs for a rough caress
Caress filled with great tenderness
Tenderness lying hidden
Hidden Deep
Deep beneath layers
Layers of Denim, Leather, and Intensity
Intensity is your engine, passion your fuel

Fuel this passion
Passion I see burning
Burning in your eyes
In your eyes is a wanting, a needing, a feeling
Feeling that can come only from you
Only from you my butch lover

My butch lover
Lover unlike any other
Unlike any other I know
I know you are not a man
Not a lady
But pure butch

A gentleman in a woman's body
A woman's body, your temple
Your temple filled with your gifts of tenderness
Tenderness and passion

Tenderness and passion consume and fill
Fill me with you
All of you

Your presence
Your love
Your strength
Your strength to compliment my weakness
My weakness is your sexy smile
Your sexy smile melts my heart
Melt my heart inside the fortress of your arms
The fortress of your arms and your heart
Your heart, the heart of a butch
The Love of a butch
A butch and no other
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Old 10-04-2013, 08:06 PM   #2
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Dance in passion with me
Like flames of the fire, like the sand and the sea


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Speak to my body, caress my mind
Will you do it every time?

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I have known you
I have seen you
I have loved you
I have dreamed you
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Old 10-05-2013, 08:13 PM   #3
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Default 3/14/2005

"Ikuma (Fire)"


Fire
Raced up my spine when I saw you saunter by

Fire
Stoked between my thighs when I knew I had caught your eye

Fire
Ignited your smile as you continued to look

Fire
Consuming me while with deft movements, my desire you took

Fire
Warming me from inside as you fill me with more and more of you

Fire
Scorching as my need for you grew

Fire
Blazed across my skin as you laid the leather across my skin

Fire
Burned in your eyes, reflecting the fire within

Fire
Raged as you made me your own

Fire
Unlike any other I have ever known
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Old 10-05-2013, 08:19 PM   #4
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Default Written 2004

I want to hold you
hold you in the moonlight
hold you on wind swept plains
hold you here like this forever

I want to kiss you
kiss you from sun up to sun down
kiss you from head to toe
kiss you like I have never kissed anyone before

I want to feel you
feel you in every fibre of my being, in every cell
feel you in my heart, my soul, and in my body
feel you right here beside me

I want to touch you
touch you like the wind on your face
touch you like the sun in your hair
touch you like only a lover can

I want to make you
make you wild and free
make you alive with desire
make you mine

I want to break you
break you down to passion
break you down to desire
break you free from your own constraints

I want to love you
love you with all that is in me
love you for all eternity
love just you
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Default Written today with someone in mind

The weight of the world
Lays heavy
Upon my weary shoulders
They say,
“Made your bed, now lie in it.”

But
This
Cannot be my bed
For, my bed
Is a place of red hot desires
Yes,
Twisted sheets
The smell of passion
Clinging longingly to the fabric

Yet,
This place
Is devoid
Of any emotion
Any spark
And sadly resembles
A barren landscape
Frigid
Cold

How I long for something else
Something different
A gentle touch upon my taut skin
A melting kiss upon my parched lips
A look of barely restrained hunger

Yet, sadly this IS my bed
And I must lie in it
Alone
As I have for time too long
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Default Renga attempt # 2

What I wouldn't give
Give to see you
See you naked, exposed
Exposed to my eyes

My eyes look
Look to where my hands lay

Lay with me tonight

Tonight I take you

You deeply fill me
Fill me to the edge
Edge of reason, edge of passion
Passion the only thing I feel

I feel you in every inch of me

Every inch of me wants you
Wants you to know
Know that you are beautiful

Beautiful you are in the moonlight

In the moonlight your body lies naked
Naked and arched
Arched into me

Into me I feel
I feel you delve
Delve into my depths
Depths yet left undiscovered
Undiscovered, hidden

Hidden in the depths of my heart

In the depths of my heart lies a passion
A passion that burns
Burns me whole

Whole you make me

Make me sigh
Sigh and moan your name
Your name rolls from my tongue

My tongue running
Running up your inner thigh

Your inner thigh tantalizing
Tantalizing and erotique

Erotique thoughts fill me

Fill me with you

You my love

My love endless

Endless are the sensations

Sensations ravage your body

Your body presses into me

Into me you push

Push me over into madness

Madness it is
It is me wanting you
Wanting you to take me and make me
Make me scream with want

Want consumes
Consumes both
Both you and I

You and I tangled
Tangled in a passionate embrace

Embrace me forever
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Written for the 9 Word Poetry Thread

Pea-coat collar turned up
His footfall
Echo soundless
Upon
Wet pavement
He'd give anything
Everything
For dryness
A warm place

Into the diner going
Nearly colliding
With her
Eyes meet
Electricity
As he takes in
Autumnal tresses
And cerulean eyes

Sodden apologies
Repeated
Exchanged
In passing

At the counter
He sits
Awaiting
That warm
Decadent
Cup of coffee

Pulling a journal
Battered
Worn
From his pocket
Opening to
Painting after painting
Sketch after sketch
To the floor
Falls a napkin
Upon it scrawled
"Call me sometime."
Followed
By a number
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Default 04/15/2006

Angels and Devils rapt in a tumultuous embrace
Saints and Sinners look on with envious eyes
While at the same time
Their gazes are filled with suprise and shock

Mankind labels them all Lunatics, Heretics, and Blasphemers in their confusion
But what do they know of the affairs of Elysium?
What do they know of life itself?
A life in which they merely exist, yet never live

It is here, that even the Gods have leant themselves to the foray


The Aurora Impetus illuminates the sky of nightfall, brightening the horizon
Lending an ethereal backdrop to the sensual dance of the seraphim and the succubi

This IS the battle between heaven and hell

Waged with
Touches
Warm embraces
Kisses
Sighs
Moans
And whimpers

Laughter and tears of the sweetest release
Echoing through the early morning skies
Like the crack of thunder
The flash of lightning

This is the "voice of god"
This is the language of desire
This is the sweetest Ambrosia
This is the essence of dreams

This is the the eternal dance
Passion and pain all in one
Brought forth in the arch of a back
The uttereance of a breathless sigh
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Default 05/14/2006

A second's respite
As I look for my soul's anchor
Attending and arranging my personal state
Emotions in an uproar, raised to a dangerous level
Yet the lesson learned
Though lips may lie, actions do not.
Passion is no replacement for Reason
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Default 05/04/2006

Repeat upon my skin the touch of leather
Stinging
Biting
Caressing like only a lover could

Touch the cool blade to my skin
Cool as Ice
Sharp as a razor
Cutting away the inhibitions of a lifetime

Leave me with shallow breath
And quaking heart
Leave me wanting your tyranny

Bind my wrists
My ankles
My heart
In a firm embrace

Pinch my skin
Pierce my soul
Make me more than just your slave, your bottom, your submissive
Make me YOURS

Leave marks upon my skin in vibrant hues of red and purple
Showing the world the honour you pay to my gift of submission

Take me to the edge
Take me to the brink
And push me to break form
Push me to defy you
Test my devotions
And my servitude

And make me all the more stronger
All the more complete for this trade
This exchange of power
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Default 05/14/2006

Do not presume to assault me further
With word, gesture, or deed

Do not torment me with your false promises
Those words hollow and meaningless

Do not presume to tell me what I must feel
What I must think, what I must be
For those things are not yours to determine

Do not try to persuade me into that trap again
For I will not be blindly lead

Do not push me, pull me or prod me
For you do not control me

I am my own soul, my own being, my own man
I will abandon your darkness to step into the light
I will awaken from the sleep that consumed me
And I will become whole
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