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Old 06-29-2011, 07:10 PM   #1
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Default Heart Thief...

You walked away so long ago
I cried so at the start
I've tried so hard to love again
But how, without my heart.

Among the things you took with you
When you walked out the door,
My soul, my heart
My faith in love,
Now lost forevermore.
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Default From the 9 Word Poetry Challenge from a few years back...

This is what I wrote with the 9 words that were provided in the challenge. I wrote this a few years ago...


The 9-Word Poetry Challenge:
Dilettante * Flotsam * Sheer * Lighter * Lazy * Woeful* Ivory * Filigree * Leaves

The Elephants Graveyard
Ivory bones bleached lighter by the sun,
Shining through the filigree of leaves.
Trumpeting widow’s woeful cries are done
Her sorrow-laden heart no longer grieves.

Very much like flotsam they are now
Sheer, skeletal debris all that remains.
Where now that massive head and noble brow,
That curling trunk that drank of the sweet rains?

The wild holds no refuge from the callous hunter
Greed impels him here to where the beasts abide.
Triumphant they carry their kill as they saunter,
Never knowing nor caring how many have died.

Dilettantes discussing the length, shape and sizes,
And the glorious trophy as they made their stave.
Ornaments are fashioned from the ivory prizes
Carved from all the tusks picked up from that grave.

Lazy matrons vying to obtain possession
Of the bounty brought to the homeland shores.
Anxious eyes covet with greedy obsession
To add yet more booty to their treasure stores.
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You walked away so long ago
I cried so at the start
I've tried so hard to love again
But how, without my heart.

Among the things you took with you
When you walked out the door,
My soul, my heart
My faith in love,
Now lost forevermore.
such emotion in this..I really like this
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words fall like rain washing over me cleansing my soul
wishing for the time when I can feel whole
whispers in my ear tease my imagination
waking me from this sleep and procrastination
where will it lead on this winding path
hoping that this feeling lasts
broken words shattered past
can you see behind my glass
look deep to find who I am
my walls are like a dam
one look from you and it broke
spilling forth till im soaked
Ri~
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Default 9 Word Poetry Challenge...

I wrote this not long ago-it's one of my fav's...hope you enjoy it!


Mending, Treasure, Morning, Alone, Fact, Soul, Love, Future, Hoping...

Morning comes,
And I’m finally alone
To ponder the fact
That my heart is still mending
From the tearing
And the rending
Yes
Still mending…

So…
Isn’t there some stitch-witchery
That will completely set me free?
To love again
To trust again
And yet
Again…

My heart is still mending
From the tearing
And the rending
Yes
Still mending…

So…(Sew it together now…)
My body you may pleasure
Now and then at your leisure,
But the fabric of my heart
To me is the real treasure…
And the resilience of my soul
Only I alone know…

So…(Sew it together now…)
I’m hoping for future love
That fits Mmmm…like a kid glove,
Hoping and coping with my
Heart that’s still mending
From the tearing
And the rending
Yes…
Still mending…

Morning Comes…
And I capture the sunrise
Shining in my eyes
And I realise
With quiet surprise…
That my heart is done mending
From the tearing
And the rending
Yes
Done mending...
Yes
Done mending...


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Default And...yet another 9 word challenge...:)

Tremble
Lips
Dinner
Menu
Watch
Calculate
Time
Rush
Table



"Just Desserts"

The fancy red napkin discreetly covers my lap
as I pick at my delicious dinner...
Watching you
watch me...
My lips begin to tremble
as I see you calculate the time,
and the distance...
as your hands caress my thigh-highs under the table,
taunting,
teasing...
telling me to "Relax...
there's no rush...
Daddy always delivers the dessert menu,
right on time..."

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Default Femme Unraveled...(The Tapestry)

I’m supposed to be put together…been told I know how to do that well...
Yet I have so many loose ends going this way and that…

The man-child …a hot blue brilliant flame of strong satin ribbon…trying desperately to blame…

The ex…a worn black leather cord…it’s tightly knotted razor edges once loved and adored…

The lover…a sky blue silk string…deliciously wrapped so delicately in between…

The dog…a metallic soldered silver thread slipping carefully by cheating death...

The job…a wiry rough jute rope…frayed and full of false promises and hopes…

The friends…a multiple strand of vibrant yarns wrapped round me keeping safe from harm…

The family…a soft and strong cotton blend allowing me room to grow and bend…

The Femme…a fierce fiery red silk strand carefully and intricately sewn by hand…
 
 
All these loose ends somehow find their place...

in their own interwoven interface…

It’s a mystery that even I sometimes cannot see…

But when I really look…

a beautiful femme tapestry…
 

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Default A Poetry Challenge -- 9 words

Haste
Public
Journey
Lips
Sweet
Intrigue
Illuminate
Shame
Bound


BOUND

It was a six year journey you took me on...
(in the beginning the strongest of bonds...)

So unaware of the intrigue you held for me there...
(in the beginning you were so full of light...
in that public room your halo so bright...
in the beginning you could illuminate my darkest night...
in the beginning I could finally see...
the sweet hot butch of you igniting an explosion of femme in me...)

Then slowly you bound me with your nameless shame,
a crushed and broken halo your wicked game,
and pressing your finger across my lips
with a drunken smile you whispered and hissed...
Shhh
Shhh
Shhh...


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