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Old 01-18-2012, 07:06 AM   #1
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sitting here my head spins
feeling I am on needles and pins
wondering if it will be the same
fearing yet again im to blame
this all feels like before
like she slammed the door
trust is a fickle and funny thing
one misunderstanding down it brings
funny how when all you show is true
why cant they believe you
is it from thier past hurts and fears
or is myself the one gaurded my dear
to this I seek an answer
look inside to find the cancer
one thing I know for sure
her love is what I adore
patience and understanding I give
soon we shall again begin to live
this I know is true
for we work toward me and you
nothing good comes easy
just wish I didnt feel so queasy
she brightens my everyday
shake off the bad I say
you know her heart in everyway
the smile for me makes me sway
emotion wells deep within
I trust that she see's who I am

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Old 01-18-2012, 07:29 AM   #2
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She has a heart of gold
in her unselfish way is bold
to give a piece of herself for a friend
wanting to help hym mend
enriching all she has in any way touched
oblivious to her pure soul as such
it humbles me to know someone
so loving and sweet,the list goes on
all I want is to see her lift
soaring high she is such a gift
to all who know her
how happy she is with her Syr
in Hym she can depend and lean
how Hy makes her eyes gleam
she deserves this kind of love
the purest of souls like a dove
all my positive thoughts I send
I am truely blessed to call her friend

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Old 01-19-2012, 07:02 AM   #3
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everyday is a gift ... greet it with a kiss
everynight is a treasure.... and not to be feared or missed
we all lose sight of little things,till one day with it it brings
sorrow to hard to bear, or joy beyond compare

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letting go and accepting that which is out of your control
realizing that all along you have been a fool
knowing that all things come for a reason
everything has its own time space and season
what you thought was a mistake can be for your good
just look at what you had and where you stood
I am accepting the things as they come
learning to dance in the rain and stop to feel the sun
today I let go of the past, in it the hurt will never pass
I take with me the lessons learned,so I dont repeat the past
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silence falls all around
wicked thoughts do abound
sparking to life a lil grin
along with interest and want of carnal sin

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pools so rich I have found
looking in them makes my heart pound
in those brown eyes so deep
a treasure to hold and keep
with sparkling hints of amber lights
a look from them brings me delight
fingertips glide over skin so soft
hearing a giggle or sigh and I am lost
beauty that takes my breath away
finding the joy she brings me everyday
a intoxicating challenge I rise to meet
my breath catches as my heart skips a beat
inside a sexy girl thats all femme
was my rare multifaceted gem

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wow.. that was interesting, in the share your work poetry thread I ran across the link to analyze whom you write like so I decided to check mine. I am pleasantly surprised, I favor James Joyce the most in like 75% of my poems, but I got Charles Dickens 3 times and a Stephen King as well along with two others I cant remember.. but that was way cool
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